Chirantha

Aww, that was so sweet. Wait, your new. Welcome to YWS. Firstly, I must remind you something before I review this. There's a rule that you have to do two ...

Well, now this was certainly metaphorical. It had it's hidden meanings and things and that's the way I like it to be. Well done on it. Brick by brick, these ...

Hey there. Welcome to YWS by the way. Or is it too late to say that? Anyway, onto this poem. Firstly, I should say that the poem itself was cute ...

Hi, welcome to YWS. Firstly, before I review this poem, I should remind you that you should do two reviews of other people's work, before you post anything. Keep a ...

Now, that was a great poem. I imagined it like as it was you who was telling me all these things, and you were right in front of me. That ...

Firstly, I must say, don't use vulgar or slang words when writting a poem. I wasn't that much impressed by the words and all. It didn't give off such a ...

Now, this was a nice poem. I like the way how you used rhyming words now and then. It gave the poem a good background. I liked it. And I ...

Wow, I never thought about Bellatrix's childhood. You made it seem realistic. I imagined every thing you had written, and your words had that effect. The parents in question gazed ...

No, I think there's something else here. Something on the island. I think it wasn't a person who killed Brian. No. I think it must have been something more dark ...

Now this was really exciting. But I think that is Jack. "OI!" I called, hoping to scare it out if it was an animal. Maybe it was a boar. I ...

Hello? Cobra? This is a series. It's the 7th part of a story. It's not the 1st part. And it should be in the Adventure section. Well, this story makes ...

I see something dark and evil heading our way. Ooooh, I'm pretty scared. I agree with Cheshire cat, that suicide was no suicide. I think this whole thing is something ...

Now, this was a bit too obvious on your part. It seems that Brian was killing off all the children and eating. And you pointed it out too soon. We'd ...

What? Chlo-chloe was ki-kil-killed? Oh my god!! But you had never mentioned that there were children there. How old were you then? "So you not only killed it, but you ...

Okay, the first thing I'm going to before I review this is to come there and give a good kick to Selena's butt. I mean, she seems to be following ...