Chirantha

This is a nice story. It had a certain new creativeness in it as it had alot of new ideas and plot. But, the story went in an old fashion ...

Let me start was by saying 'Well done' as you have written a really great Harry Potter fanfic. The thing I really got into this story was the way you ...

Okay, first of all, I should tell you that YWS has rules saying that you should post atleast 2 reviews before posting anything, and then you can post as much ...

The story had a certain value in it, and considering you wrote it in school, well, it's fairly okay. But, I got really muddled up. I mean, when I read ...

Wow, nice poem. As "Caitlingrant" had said above, you poem seems so deep, and yet so understandable and emotive. With each word the reader feels the sorrow you want them ...

Nutmeg, your story is amazing. There were two reasons for making me say this. One was your use of words, characters and best of all innocence. A story is incomplete ...

Hmm, this was a really nice story. So dark, and eye-catching. You have portrayed the emotions of the character very well. You have got inside her and showed the reader ...

When I looked in those cold dead eyes It was then I finally realized. I didn't know why I couldn't see The hellish way you treated me Was not a ...

Finally, An Artemis Fowl fan-fic. I just love Artemis Fowl series and it's plot. Okay, let's see about this story. Joseph was late. This was unusual. Joseph, for as long ...

Okay, first let me congratulate you on getting this type of idea. It was very creative and also imaginative. But, the story was very ABRUPT! What I meant by this ...

Hmm. Rather an unusual story I must say. It seemed to be that you are the one who is narrating the story. And the character was even more unusual. Have ...

This was a nice poem. It like as Conrad said, the way music affects people. Your fingers played over the smooth buttons of the CD player, and one second later ...

This poem attracted my attention by the way you had compared youself to everything from paper to the sun. It's an unusual characteristic of a poem, but nevertheless, it was ...

Ooh, a very emotional poem this was. I felt like I was ready to cry. This poem depicts that you are dreaming of you only love and then you suddenly ...

Wait, in this poem, you are talking to the girl who is staring at her boyfriend isn't it? Well, it was a good poem. Rather demanding like. You seem to ...