Chirantha

I can't say anything important about this because I'm don't know that much about poems. But I can say that if you kept your spacing between two lines to one ...

I nearly cried when I read this. :cry: Your story was that emotional and sad. Yes, the best part of it was the part where you had written about George ...

Hmm, this doesn't make a connection with the first part of the story. Oh well, it was written well. :) Nit-picks, God, why must she call me in that shrill ...

Ooooh, I really liked it. I mean loved it. The way you had written it, it was so emotional. I mean, the way you shed tears and smiled and showed ...

First, I should say that you should rate this "R" or "PG13" because of the use of drugs and vulgar languages. Okay, I can say it was good but it ...

A really great story. It's so realistic. And Joe, by putting that much "m"s in your review you are just cheating to make that a review. :x About the story, ...

Ummmmm, I don't know what to say about this. For one thing, I didn't understand the story. See this, Imagine, if you will, a monkey. A monkey who sits in ...

Very interesting. As if the storyteller or the announcer is talking to an audience. Yeah, I've to agree with the others, because for the word 'events' it will be more ...

Oooh, good story. For minute while reading your story, I really felt like being in the castle with the othes. Nit-picks, Their lives would never be the same again... Actually ...

Okay, your story was good but weird and unusual. And you had rushed through it. I mean you had introduced character too fast. And you haven't described any single one. ...

Hmm, thoughtful plot. But I thought that the rivalry between Slythering and Griffindor. But this is more better. And the Hufflepuff's sign is an eagle. This was really well written, ...

Oooh, getting scary, isn't it? Okay, I may have sounded harsh in the last review but I'm sorry for that. Okay, firstly you should divide the paragraphs and dialogues. Keeping ...

I sorry I couldn't review this yesterday but I had some er......never mind. okay, about this story. I strongly recommend for you to keep spaces and make paragraphs. And seperate ...

Oooh, your story is getting exciting. But it lacked the fact about how they survived the first and second day. You had started from the 6th day. And you only ...

Let me see, you story was well written and described well. But I didn't get the idea of what your character looks like. That, you haven't decribed. Okay, nit-picks, Charlotte ...