ChiquitaPeroPicosa

It would be one thing if your piece was more satirical, but in all honesty it "sounded" like you meant what you were saying about men. I don't know you, ...

When I clicked on the post "Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women" I knew I was in for some laughs, but this was far better than what I ...

I really liked the imagery you created. It was simple but pretty easy to follow. It left it open enough that just about anyone could relate to it, which as ...

I don't know if it was intentional or not but the way you typed out your stanza didn't always seemed to make sense. Like it would break in the middle ...

I like the idea and emotion behind your work, but you use and then drop the rhyme scheme as it suits you which disrupts the flow of the poem because ...

I thought it was really, really sweet. I agree that the beginning several lines with the same word over and over made it a) kind of monotonous and b) more ...

I really liked it. I agree with the whole unnecessary commas thing, unless you intended to make it that stilted, but I wouldn't think so. I also agree that this ...

I'm of little to know help on critiquing poetry, having never written any or read much, but I will say while I normally find poetry to be confusing and overly ...

I really liked the style and attention to detail, but I'm not really seeing how this is a romance. It sort of goes from "get my suitcase, asshole," to her ...