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ChipsMcCoy

ChipsMcCoy

  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Scared of My Shadow

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I liked the idea of shadows centering interestingly in your poem. I also liked how your formatted this piece, as if it were written ...

    Jul 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Blank Soul

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I found your title to be very intriguing and your concept was quite a dark one centering around self harm which is unfortunately often ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Copper

    Hey, Chips here with a review for you. I liked how you kept the poem focused at each stage, it all linked in together. Your poem title was intriguing as ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Falling on my Face.

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I found your poem title to be humorous, so I was expecting a hint of that through your poem. But I found it to ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    Hello Katya, Chips here with a review for you. I liked how your the story in your poem kept on building and building. I liked the slight suspense you created ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If my lashes flutter will I fall apart?

    Hello, Chippy here with a review. This was a nice poem, it almost read as if it were lyrical in my view. I really liked the title, it was sweet ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No longer near the surface

    Hello, Chippy here with a review. You have quite an interesting poem here. It could be interpreted in multiple ways, I liked how you continued on the narrative story, it ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Health Re: A Tribute to the Semicolon Project

    Hey, Chippy here with a review. You have an entrancing concept here, it's very true semicolons are love and semicolons are light. Just kidding, but semicolons are a great use ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Titleless (Cutting Poem) *Trigger Warning*

    Hey, Chippy here with a review. This seems like quite a personal and emotional piece since self harming isn't really the most joyous of topics to write about, though it's ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dear Lord (It's Worth It To Me)

    Hey, Chips here with a review. You have a very lovely poem here. Despite it not being necessarily spiritual according to you, it has many aspects that a spiritual person ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Thunderstorm

    Hello, Chips here with a review! I liked how you used a playful animal such as a dog and put your own spin on it. You also kept the main ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love

    Hello, Chips here with a review! I liked how you tried to describe "love", which can seem indescribable to some. You have expressed it in a different way. You were ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Apart Time

    Hello, Chips here with a review! Good for you for working up the courage to post this poem as it seems quite a personal piece for you. I liked how ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'll Take My Vitamin D in a Supplement, Thanks

    Hello, Chips here to review! This was a really interesting concept for a poem. I loved the title, it was engaging an humorous. I thought your rhyme scheme worked really ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Life Musings

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I liked how wise this piece was, it showed that the character was speaking from a place of experience. It had a lovely message ...

    Jun 28, 2014


Treat all disasters as if they were trivialities but never treat a triviality as if it were a disaster.
— Quentin Crisp