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Re: Scared of My Shadow
Hello, Chips here with a review. I liked the idea of shadows centering interestingly in your poem. I also liked how your formatted this piece, as if it were written ...
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: Blank Soul
Hello, Chips here with a review. I found your title to be very intriguing and your concept was quite a dark one centering around self harm which is unfortunately often ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Copper
Hey, Chips here with a review for you. I liked how you kept the poem focused at each stage, it all linked in together. Your poem title was intriguing as ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling on my Face.
Hello, Chips here with a review. I found your poem title to be humorous, so I was expecting a hint of that through your poem. But I found it to ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: I remember that one time...
Hello Katya, Chips here with a review for you. I liked how your the story in your poem kept on building and building. I liked the slight suspense you created ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: If my lashes flutter will I fall apart?
Hello, Chippy here with a review. This was a nice poem, it almost read as if it were lyrical in my view. I really liked the title, it was sweet ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: No longer near the surface
Hello, Chippy here with a review. You have quite an interesting poem here. It could be interpreted in multiple ways, I liked how you continued on the narrative story, it ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: A Tribute to the Semicolon Project
Hey, Chippy here with a review. You have an entrancing concept here, it's very true semicolons are love and semicolons are light. Just kidding, but semicolons are a great use ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Titleless (Cutting Poem) *Trigger Warning*
Hey, Chippy here with a review. This seems like quite a personal and emotional piece since self harming isn't really the most joyous of topics to write about, though it's ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Dear Lord (It's Worth It To Me)
Hey, Chips here with a review. You have a very lovely poem here. Despite it not being necessarily spiritual according to you, it has many aspects that a spiritual person ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: The Thunderstorm
Hello, Chips here with a review! I liked how you used a playful animal such as a dog and put your own spin on it. You also kept the main ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Love
Hello, Chips here with a review! I liked how you tried to describe "love", which can seem indescribable to some. You have expressed it in a different way. You were ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Apart Time
Hello, Chips here with a review! Good for you for working up the courage to post this poem as it seems quite a personal piece for you. I liked how ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: I'll Take My Vitamin D in a Supplement, Thanks
Hello, Chips here to review! This was a really interesting concept for a poem. I loved the title, it was engaging an humorous. I thought your rhyme scheme worked really ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Life Musings
Hello, Chips here with a review. I liked how wise this piece was, it showed that the character was speaking from a place of experience. It had a lovely message ...
Jun 28, 2014
