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Re: Stolen
Hi There I agree with the comments of the others on not grasping the concept but yet i caught the idea of what you were writing. I maybe got a ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
Hey there :) i REALLy enjoyed this poetry it is amazing piece of poetry.. Everything seemed to fit perfectly together and made such great sence.I reallh hope you carry on ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Definitely maybe
Hey there I'm China Cookie Your friend seems to be an amazing poet. This poem is absolutlety GGRREEAATT!!!!!!!!! i really enjoyed reading it and it has a true meaning to ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: "I Love You," You Said
Hi there I'm China Cookie. WOW is one of the many words I could use to Describe your poem. I like how you used "i love you" at the vbeggining ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Best Friend
hey there I'm China Cookie. I just want to start by saying my poems are new and I,m not that great yet,but i will help where i can. Your poem ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: My Soul Mate
Hi there I'm China Cookie. Well when I read your poem i was amazed of the honesty you gave into and I like that about the poem.Its true and has ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Lies
Hi there I'm China Cookie! I really did enjoy reading your poem. Wa extreamly catching in the last half. The questions in the beggining laked alot of true emotion. But ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey there i'm China Cookie... just wanted t thank you for the review you left me.. This poem is very short yet Good... I'm not sure what your getting at ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Tales of Lemeria: Chapter 1: Wake Up
Hey I'm China Cookie! Deep breaths indicated something was definitely not right. My chest felt heavy but my feet felt light. My head was throbbing. I raised my head off ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Lucifer's Gold
Hey I'm China Cookie! Captain Legama looked over the bowsprit of his ship, the sun glinting off the ocean making it into one of purest gold. He, as with the ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: So This Is Goodbye
Hey I'm China Cookie Wow... That poem is extreamly deep but its beautiful and I guess the poem was not suppose to rhyme but it gave it a great feel ...
Dec 13, 2010
