ChibiGiraffe

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Hey, ChibiGiraffe here. I haven't reviewed novel stuff in awhile, so please bear with me. :P I'm going to review all the unfun grammar issues with this story first. I ...

Hey. I'm really not a big fan of Romeo and Juliet (don't really like insta-love) but pushing that aside, I thought this was good. I like the way you describe ...

Hey there! I haven't reviewed anything in awhile, so forgive me, I'm a little rusty. My God. The first part of this poem is pretty much how I'm feeling right ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS! You're totally going to love it here. ;) I love getting reviews, it's my favorite part of this site! So if you don't mind, ...

Wow. This was great! You really put your point across and used good imagery to boot. :) Nitpicks: Her hair looked like warm chocolate and Her caramel-coloured skin was flawless. ...

Hahaha, this was so epic. :) My only nitpick is that the last line sounds a little out of place. I think that if you cut out the last line ...

Hey there! Chibi here. So, as Ignatius said, this poem really needs a grammar check. Spelling, capitalization, punctuation are just as important in poetry as it is in prose. Below's ...

OMG, this was awesome! XD, I loved the twist at the end. I seriously thought that it would be the good side of the person whose point of view you ...

Okay, so I liked this. Your topic was really awesome. I never really thought about comparing my life to a leaf's. A very non-cliche approach to life. HOWEVER, if this ...

LOL, this made me laugh. :D Normally I don't like rhyming poetry but this was really awesome. XD I think your lines are a little bit long in this and ...

I'm not a real big fan of formal poetry, but this made me smile. :) I don't know much about the rules of sonnets or about iambic pentameter and whatnot, ...

Hi there! So since you commented on my poem, I figured I'd take a look-see! :) So I'll just go straight out and say I'm not a big fan of ...

Hey there! Chibi here. And welcome to YWS! So I love this poem. I think you brought your message across great while still being able to rhyme, something I am ...

Hey. Chibi's here! :D It took me a couple times reading this poem in order to understand it. I kept thinking that when you mentioned the girl who never was, ...