Chibi

The others have said pretty much all that needs to be said, but htere's one teeny tiny little spelling mistake.... It's eaves dropping, not ease. Ease means to relax. Otherwise, ...

Edited. And as I said dear, it was originally one part, this and the second part, but after posting I thought that it was a touch long, and chopped it ...

I know it doesn't have much punctuation....for one I was crying as I wrote it. No, his life isn't ending -because- of the blade, but -by- the blade. He actually ...

I like it, it's very....relevant for me. Well done, it touched me, like few poems have, and I adore poetry :) My compliments to you. ~Chibi

Awwww.....*wipes away a tear* That's so sweet...and sad... *sniffles* I can't crit it, my eyes are all blurry. :cry:

oooh, I feel loved! ^_^ I so rarely get replies...maybe because I don't post much...>_> First off, my apologies, I start all of my tales with info dumpage, giving the ...

oooooh....I likes it. I likes it alot! ...but then, I'm a bit biased, I love vampy stories. More! ...oh, and I'm too tired for a proper crit so I'll just ...

Grar! *sulk* I want to read that poem now. I read the critiques and it were sounds intruiging. But it's not there! *sulks more, poutingly* No fair! ~Chibi

Ah thanks...hehe, but I don't actually -use- all of the orders, nor describe them in that much detail in the rest of my tale...I suppose I could cut it out...but ...

I like do alot of others. I can even hear the tune your lyrics are for. It's sweet. Well done. ~Chibi

Hmm....Nice. My first fanfic reading and well...I'm a little lost as to whats actually happening. *checks back* yay, I'm a private XD ...somewhere. Keep it up, and post! I want ...

Hmm...yeah. Alright, a bi of clarification here....since I honestly don't know how to do it in the poem. -_- You managed to find all the parts that I didn't know ...

I noticed. I just didn't know where to put it is all.Thanks anyways. :?

A very negative poem...I'm not sure if I like it. I do agree with...write me? (sorry, I'm new, I don't know all of your names yet) it's not funny, it's ...