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faith said it all. i dido her but i did love this part: "The brick walls and the foreign lampposts are falling down and they are crushing the life out ...

That was a very beautiful story. However, I think it should have been in the narrative section...oh well.

Okay now it makes more sense. I never did know that though. God. That's a powerful poem...really.

Redundant and Predictable. And I agree with Brad.

I didn't really understand it which kind of prevented me from enjoying. However, if I did get it I probably would have enjoyed it a lot more. But what's the ...

It was really sweet. It didn't really remind me of my dad or anything but I thought it was great. I don't know, my dad has sort of a very ...

Is this about small little girls or dolls or something? If so, the concept is great because you don't often see poems on that subject. Even if it wasn't, it ...

This is the kind of poem I can relate to so well I wish I could call it mine. I also wish I could dedicate it to someone. This is ...

I didn't get it either, but that doesn't matter. I enjoyed the poem. The rhthym was the best and I loved the third stanza and the poem's ending. Great job. ...

That was very nice. It sounds like something you would say about someone who died...and that makes it very powerful in my opinion. Is this poem about TYWC Piano Man?

Too much imagery and not enough substance.

Latches onto my neck and pulls me closer to itself Until I cannot leave this sight of hopelessness This would probably look and sound better being 3 or 4 lines.

Black Daisy: Yes, He is trying to kill himself. Once again, *sighs* I don't think I made that very clear. Hekategirl: It gets hard when you try to include scripture ...

It's about people who die with no name (figuratively speaking). I have a hard time with including the definition or the point in my poems. And when I do, it ...

I can never make my poems complete. There's always the concept...always the idea but it never comes together in the end. You walk away feeling like it was incomplete. Perhaps ...