Cheetah

I loved this! You are such a good writer!! In the part where she was looking at the bodies I was so scared Arun was among them! You really attached ...

Hello! Cheetah here for your review!! This was really good! I'm always glad to read the first chapters of anything! I enjoyed this one a lot, so thanks for sharing. ...

This was... Wow. You let the reader become a part of the story by making all characters anonymous. There were only a few things I would change. "You didn't care ...

This was so amazing. You really helped the reader feel everything Scott was going through. I especially liked the part with the messaging machine, that part felt symbolic to me. ...

First off, thanks for posting this! I enjoyed reading it. I really like to read apocalyptic stories. It had a nice flow to it. I'm looking forward to finding out ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your piece! First off, great poem! It kept me hooked all the way through, and for some writers that's the hardest part. You made it ...

Hello, MysteryMe and congrats on making the literary spotlight! What I just read was really interesting, I've never really thought about writing that way. It was awesome and I didn't ...

I loved this story! It's what many little kids dream of- their toys talking back to them. I love how it repeated itself a bit at the end, it made ...

Wow. Normally I don't like poems- I tend to just push them aside, but now I'll look more closely at them because this was fantastic! I love the way you ...

It was reeeally good! I love the way you write- it's so smooth and I can see it happening. I have also read "The Tears That Wouldn't Come," and I ...

This was really good! I like the structure and there are only a few edits I would suggest. 1. Instead of saying that "it is positioned at my bed table." ...

Woah. Just woah. This. Was. Amazing. Not many stories pull me in, especially apocalyptic ones, but this was so descriptive and clear in just the right way, I could see ...

Beautiful, although I know you said you shared it somewhere else before, I'm glad you shared it again because otherwise I wouldn't have seen it. I never really thought about ...

Hi moon shadow. This was a very good piece and you should definitely write more! I love the way your words and sentences seem to flow together. There was only ...

Just like Yuka, I want to know what happened to Alex!! The one thing I would change is how often you use the word "probably." In some cases it's necessary, ...