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Re: The Diary of the Sluttiest Virgin
I like the title of this, thats what drew me in. But i do have to say it sounds maybe too much like a diary and not so much like ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Wishing On A Dead Star
I really love thi, maybe because it speaks to me so personally. I understand these feelings you're describing and I empathize. A few of my favorite lines: "As I wish ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: A Walk Down Memory Lane
I really enjoy this poem. You have a way of saying what you want to say so simply and clearly, but also with great word choice and visuals. I feel ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Last Summer
The whole second stanza comes across as a sing to me, I love it!! "It was a summer time love, a one way trip I knew this was gonna happen ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: The Nomad
The Nomad, Wow. I am very impressed with this. I love the whole second stanza to death. The style of writing is very refreshing to m. It comes across to ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Butterfly Kisses
I love how simple this is but meaningful. Reminds me of butterflies in my stomach when you have those first sweet kisses. Then they disappear "like the age of innocence." ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Starlight
First off I have to say that I chose to read this because anything with the word starlight seems appealing to me. I can see where you are taking this ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Farewell, my good friend.
I completely feel this all coming from your heart. The best poems that I have read all seem to be noticeably from a deep place in the mind where feelings ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Africa
I can only assume this poem is referring to Nelson Mandela. I like the way this flows in the beginning and the rhyming sounds nice to read a loud. I ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Fantasies and Daydreams Never End Like Fairy Tales and Lullabys
I love the end to this poem. "One thousand smiles unforced. Of course." It's cute but meaningful. A few things i would like to point out though are that in ...
Aug 15, 2013
