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Re: Elodie Bones: Prologue
Thanks for this review! I decided to make this the first chapter because I had the same problems that I was having with New Haven with the prologue and all. ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones: Prologue
Yeah I might do what I did for New Haven and just say this was a flash back or something.
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones: Prologue
Thanks for this review. I'm thinking of making this chapter one but I don't know because Elodie is a teenager in the other chapters. Also Mrs. Bones is in shock ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones: Prologue
Thanks for this review! Also I know that Elodie is a french name but Elodia is an Italian name. They just call her Elodie as a nickname.
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones: Prologue
hehe. Thanks so much for this review. The second grammar mistake I think is incorrect because there's no need for a pause after night. I agree with the other points ...
Feb 27, 2016 -
Re: How Do You Say, 'Good Morning'?
I can here to review but by the time I finished reading I decided not to. This is such a good poem. Great job!
Feb 27, 2016 -
Re: The City(1)
No problem!
Feb 21, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 2: A Rather Curious Girl
Thanks for this review. This is my first time writing with two POV so I understand that there will be a lot I'll have to look out for.
Feb 21, 2016 -
Re: She Stays
Thanks so much for this review :D
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Growing
Thank you so much. Your review was very helpful even though you didn't really tell me anything that I need to fix. Now I can keep in mind the things ...
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: Growing
Thanks for the review and yes it is free verse.
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: Growing
Really? Thank you!
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: She Stays
Thanks Ever!
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: Nature's Fire
Glad I could help!%u256D(%u2661%uFF65%u3142%uFF65)%u0648 %u0311%u0311
Feb 18, 2016 -
Re: The Ride of a Lifetime
Me? Ha. Thanks though
Feb 18, 2016