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OMG!!!!! THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!! and you know how much i don't like writing in caps because it goes against my aesthetic ;)

Yeah, that's true. I wasn't sure Rose knew if okay was the grammatically correct way to spell it or not.

true true

"ok" is texting slang xD (my soul dies a little every time i see it in writing).

'okay' not 'ok' in writing *cringes* (other than that, good poem)

Ah okay. Maybe add more detail to that so we really see the change. It was sort of subtle. Maybe if you talked more about the calmness coming over her.

Thanks, Dracula! This review helped loads! I'll try to review your story but if I forget just PM me xD I forget things sometimes hehe

I found it on a thread and thank you so much! It means a lot! If you want to know when the next chapter comes out you can join the ...

Coming from me? *honestly shocked* xD wait what

It does take place in a future where we depend on machines more ;) Thanks for you comment. If you're interested in Atana and want to keep reading, I have ...

Oh okay. I guess not everyone will get that it's a reference and it's not like you said it was a reference anywhere.

Thanks Audy

Okay thanks!

Thanks for the review. So what do you think I should do to make this poem better? xD (what parts should I focus on fixing and such)

lol read my most recent stuff for something decent xD this poem is bad (but not as bad at 'Old Poetry' folder)