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Re: saturday night
I don't know much about guns but I really like the flow of the poem. The ending was thoughtful and satisfying. I'm not a huge fan of how the last ...
Feb 24, 2019 -
Re: Growth
Thanks so much for your advice. I didn't intentionally rhyme though.
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: one last card game
The personal poems tend to be the best ones
Dec 1, 2018 -
Re: one last card game
I just realized that I commented last year lol.
Dec 1, 2018 -
Re: one last card game
Okay, Lael, this is incredible. The storytelling in this is soooo good. It's so heartbreaking to read it but the way you chose to tell this story is perfect. I ...
Dec 1, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 2
Thanks!
Jul 20, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 2
Great! I'll look forward to your review.
Jul 18, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 1.1
I wasn't planning on reading the whole chapter but I was immediately sucked in and I couldn't stop. It's so well written, Pan! I'll definitely keep reading and I might ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: Summer had just begun- A Reality tale
No problem!
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: d.f.
Thanks!
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 1
Awe! I hope things get less hectic for you.
Jun 26, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 2
Thanks!
Jun 26, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 1
I'm so glad you decided to review Black Water!
Jun 26, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 1
Thanks!
Jun 25, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 2
Thanks! Your ideas are definitely great and I think I'll use some of them to help improve this chapter. I hope you continue reading Black Water!
Jun 25, 2018