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uwu indeed

Ofc! Also I forgot mention that the "yellow-green voice" confused me. I think you mentioned that she has synesthesia, if so, I think you should mention that in this chapter ...

Ah okay. Yeah I already revised it and I'm trying to get some people to read the revised version for me, but it's okay if you don't want to! Thanks ...

Hey LordMomo, thank so much for reading over this! If you came from my wallpost, this is the unrevised version. The version I wanted people to check for me is ...

That's okay! I'm so glad you found this helpful!

Thank you so much for your review! It was very helpful and I appreciated the well-roundedness of your review. Thank you for the compliments and the critiques, both are very ...

Hi Rain! Thank you so much for taking time to review my story! I totally agree with you. In regards to thoughts/memories, my prof didn't approve of the use of ...

Thank you for your review! I agree that I should develop the reveal of the fairies and work on conveying my mc's emotions. However, I don't agree with your main ...

Of course!

Really beautiful! The only critic I have is that "crescents of soil" doesn't match the baked goods theme. Maybe burnt croissants? Sorry if that's a dumb suggestion. This is a ...

This is so good!

Thanks