Hey Charm!
This is a really sweet poem . The best thing about this is how you have conveyed your emotions so beautifully. The sound of the poem is amazing and so is the Imagery. I felt that I was standing on the beach as you recited this to your loved one . It is a very well written piece and the way you have laid this is also interesting.
On the other hand ,the layout might seem a little confusing but all in all it adds to the sense of the poem. You could check for the punctuation a little but it is totally your choice. I personally , can't pick one line as my favorite , I LOVE THE WHOLE THING! I hope you keep posting more such poems. I must say that you do have certain charm.
Keep writing
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