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Hello! I'm here to review this story! Plot and Pace: I thought they were humans but then I heard tail and wings. So they are dragons? The pace is fast ...

Hi! I'm here to fulfill that promise I made you :) This was really good! I did not notice any mistakes. Plot: I was very confused when the man was ...

'Ello! I'm here to do that review I promised you. Sorry I'm a little late. I had to catch up to my writing schedule, but now that I am ahead ...

'Ello! I'm here to review your work! My name is Rachel but some people just called me Mad When I first started reading this I notice well.... just look at ...

Hi! Some Praise: This is just so amazing. It is very rare that any YWS work will pull me in and make me forget I'm reviewing but you did so ...

Hi cg26! Welcome to YWS! Some Praise: The story sounds interesting and I can't wait to hear what happens later. Grammar: Quite a few grammar mistakes. Plot: The plot and ...

Hi! Some praise as usual: Thank you for making the chapter short it makes it easier to find time to review. And as I said last review you have an ...

Hi! Let's start with some praise: Caspienne is such a beautiful name! I love how she plays guitar. Grammar: I didn't see any mistakes. Characters: Caspienne seems very real and ...

First of all, when I saw that you wrote something that I could review I got really excited. Before I start reviewing I want you to know I really excited ...

There are some grammar problems but over all it's a great story. The foundation you build in you first chapter has to be strong enough to support the rest of ...

I just love this and I think we both have a very similar idea on change. I am also writing a book called New Haven. The first and second chapters ...

First of all, hello! The first things I noticed was how long this chapter is (very long). That might just be me (I tend to prefer shorter chapters). The second ...

This is an amazing poem and I can tell that you yourself are an amazing writer. I don't have much criticism because I felt it was very well written. "We ...

This is amazing and emotional story. It's so sad and so well written. The last paragraph was emotional and sad but it also felt really rushed as did some of ...

The first paragraph is a little weird. It's hard to understand and doesn't flow that nicely. Also you should write "okay" instead of "OK". For example "Let’s skip the part ...