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Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: it's complicated

    Hey Alli! Here I am to review your poem! I love the way you formatted this but I found some wording confusing so I thought I'd drop in and do ...

    Mar 19, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Dear Victoria, You Kill Me

    Hi! So I decided to give you a review lol so ennnnjooooyyyy (hopefully). This will be short because I think this poem is one of the best I've read on ...

    Feb 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Salem

    Hey writervid! I see a lot of potential in this poem and hopefully my review will help you edit it and make it even better. I found that most of ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: You've Ruptured the World

    Hey! This the first poem of yours that I've read and I have to say I'm very impressed. This poem is really, really well-written and it's obvious that you have ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stars

    Hey Chitz! I'm going to keep this review short and sweet just like your poem but if you have any questions please feel free to ask me. Now I'm definitely ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 1

    Hey Mea! You asked me to review this in July and I totally forgot but I'm here now. Hopefully if my review is good enough it will make it up ...

    Dec 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 7

    Hey Stormcloud! Thanks for requesting a review. Hopefully, I won’t disappoint, haha. I can be a bit harsh with my words since I’m a blunt, honest person but I hope ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing

    Hey Blue! Here I am. Finally . I know you asked me to review this quite a while ago but I’m extremely lazy and I’ve been barely able to get ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Never Be Alone Chapter 1 (LGBT)

    Hey Ella (is it okay if I call you that?)! I'm super hyped to review your first novel ever! That's so exciting and I really hope I can help you ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: madhouse of carousels

    Hey Honey

    May 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Shoreline

    Hey Princessink! I'm here to review your poem. I'm excited to see a one stanza poem since I write these a lot and they tend to be my favorite style. ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the library

    Hey RippleGylf! I really like this poem. The flow, imagery, and style is absolutely beautiful. I think, perhaps, you could alter the last line. "Novel ideas" doesn't work for me ...

    Mar 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Dramatic Re: An Open Letter To My Greatest Crush (3/20/17)

    Hey yearsofpain! I was really drawn to this article because just yesterday I told my crush how I felt about him xD which was interesting . Anyway I'll try to ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Allegedly Intro

    Hey, SarukaTheHuman! I'm here to review your short story. First of all, I want to say that your style and voice as a narrator is really good and professional. Your ...

    Mar 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love-Lies-Bleeding

    Hey PrincessInk! This is sooo good. I really loved this! I had to google "Amaranthus caudatus" and honestly I wasn't a huge fan of that. I'm fine with going on ...

    Mar 1, 2017


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy