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Re: it's complicated
Hey Alli! Here I am to review your poem! I love the way you formatted this but I found some wording confusing so I thought I'd drop in and do ...
Mar 19, 2018 -
Re: Dear Victoria, You Kill Me
Hi! So I decided to give you a review lol so ennnnjooooyyyy (hopefully). This will be short because I think this poem is one of the best I've read on ...
Feb 22, 2018 -
Re: Salem
Hey writervid! I see a lot of potential in this poem and hopefully my review will help you edit it and make it even better. I found that most of ...
Jan 10, 2018 -
Re: You've Ruptured the World
Hey! This the first poem of yours that I've read and I have to say I'm very impressed. This poem is really, really well-written and it's obvious that you have ...
Jan 10, 2018 -
Re: Stars
Hey Chitz! I'm going to keep this review short and sweet just like your poem but if you have any questions please feel free to ask me. Now I'm definitely ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 1
Hey Mea! You asked me to review this in July and I totally forgot but I'm here now. Hopefully if my review is good enough it will make it up ...
Dec 16, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 7
Hey Stormcloud! Thanks for requesting a review. Hopefully, I won’t disappoint, haha. I can be a bit harsh with my words since I’m a blunt, honest person but I hope ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing
Hey Blue! Here I am. Finally . I know you asked me to review this quite a while ago but I’m extremely lazy and I’ve been barely able to get ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: Never Be Alone Chapter 1 (LGBT)
Hey Ella (is it okay if I call you that?)! I'm super hyped to review your first novel ever! That's so exciting and I really hope I can help you ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: madhouse of carousels
Hey Honey
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Shoreline
Hey Princessink! I'm here to review your poem. I'm excited to see a one stanza poem since I write these a lot and they tend to be my favorite style. ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: the library
Hey RippleGylf! I really like this poem. The flow, imagery, and style is absolutely beautiful. I think, perhaps, you could alter the last line. "Novel ideas" doesn't work for me ...
Mar 29, 2017 -
Re: An Open Letter To My Greatest Crush (3/20/17)
Hey yearsofpain! I was really drawn to this article because just yesterday I told my crush how I felt about him xD which was interesting . Anyway I'll try to ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: Allegedly Intro
Hey, SarukaTheHuman! I'm here to review your short story. First of all, I want to say that your style and voice as a narrator is really good and professional. Your ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Love-Lies-Bleeding
Hey PrincessInk! This is sooo good. I really loved this! I had to google "Amaranthus caudatus" and honestly I wasn't a huge fan of that. I'm fine with going on ...
Mar 1, 2017
