Charade

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Freaks, Hated, We are different. Our guide is unknown to them; They call the emotion fake, Temporary, Nonexistent. Our leader is hard; They are afraid. I LOVE ...

Harro, Wulf ^-^ First off, I like the way you mentioned her hair color, and then slid in the eye color as a side thought. If that makes sense at ...

Harro, Robin. ^-^ First off, I’d like to say I love the emotion in this. It’s so . . . . Real, to me. You name is like a scar ...

I absolutely love this! XD The theme, the air it has----I loved it. I don’t know what to comment on exactly, because it was so good lol I guess the ...

Harro, Cairo ^-^ The beginning was very promising, and very well written. Fresh tears run down her face, burning her cheeks before disappearing into the night air. Her hands are ...

Hiya, I love the ending line: “Is this real?” It added so much to the poem. That being said, I would add more detail. It has potential. A lot, in ...

Hewwu again ^-^ First off, I absolutely love how at the beginning you write: “Fall, Fall, Fall away. Fall, Fall into “yesterday.” And when it’s closing, it reads: “Falling, Falling, ...

Harro, cailey =-) Well, let me start off by saying that I love the emotion that was put into this. I believe that if you’re going to write poetry, it ...