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Re: The Field Slaves
No after
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Re: Writers KrazyWriter And Chanta1234.... What Happened It's Being Worked On
thank you
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Re: Writers KrazyWriter And Chanta1234.... What Happened It's Being Worked On
Yes,well first he finds her attractive about her being his wife they met first in the prologue in the coffee shop i should write more and a prologue to it ...
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Re: Writers KrazyWriter And Chanta1234.... What Happened It's Being Worked On
thank you but do you think it needs work
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Re: The Field Slaves
well the parts where there a commas everywhere how come you put them everywhere
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Re: All This Time Prologue
sorry it did it two times
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Re: Writers KrazyWriter And Chanta1234.... What Happened It's Being Worked On
oh okay is there anything wrong with the spelling
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Re: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 16) Part 1: Two-bit Bridle
your welcome and wow thats very interesting
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Re: The Field Slaves
no grammar but i thought the punctuations was a little bit off
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Re: Blank Canvas
your welcome and I think I am also and you should read my book i'll send u a link
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Re: LAPIS :Chapter 23:
yes i understand and nothing really i just wrote stuff heheh but its good
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Re: LAPIS :Chapter 25:
thank you
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Re: Dragon Hunted (warning: may contain sheep)
This is a very go poem but is this everything you wrote or are you writing more. Are you talking about horse? There is nothing to critize because this is ...
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Re: Writers KrazyWriter And Chanta1234.... What Happened It's Being Worked On
what do you mean
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Re: Flashing Pixels
thanks
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