ChangeTheWorld

Hola! Coma estas? :) To be different is to be unnatural. Disgusting, impure. These are really good comparisons, and these are thought people actually have when they get made fun ...

Hi there. I'm Change. Let's get rockin! The truth about love is crying your ass out This is phrased just a little oddly, I've never heard it put that way ...

Hi! reviewy reviewy time! right from the start I can already tell you have great characters developed, and not only that but a great relationship dynamic. The dialogue is really ...

Review time!!! Yay! He began to run with the stampede of other animals. Other than the minor spelling error, I think this sentence would sound better if you just switch ...

Hey there! Change is here to change your life! Get it? heehee. Here I go ;) There I was, sitting on my battered old couch that hadn't been dry cleaned ...

Hey! It's review day! I'm going to review your work if that's okay? ;) after living in the black I agree about changing "black" to "dark". stung and watered While ...

Hola! I am here to review the glorious work you have put forth! ;) Shadow, a silent death-- slowly squeezes life from joy and laughter. Pain is left, in darkness ...

Hey! Change here! It's great you got so many reviews but here's another! To start off, I can already tell with the title that this idea is completely original and ...

Change here! Ready for some poetry. Even though it's so short, I like the poem. There should be capitalization in the title but that's just a minor detail that bugged ...

Hey Cheddar! Here as promised even though you didn't ask! I like the parallelism exhibited in the first two paragraphs. It's very clever and a good opener to show that ...

"What is a choir, but groups of lips that sing?" "What, then, is a wedding, than a mere crowd" "For what well-wishers doth wish to last well?" "Thus, with simple ...

I gotta prepare because I'm going to edit while I read. Breath Breath Okay now I can do it! You ready? "anticipation piling more on me" I feel like this ...

First off, I love anything from a child's point of view because it's just so different and interesting. These kinds of works always give such a different feel and children ...

I love the title to start. It makes you think. And I love how you use two analogies right away. It could potentially be difficult to use monsters and puppets ...

Piles of material stare at me with a judging exterior This line is clever, I like the personification because it really fits the tone I think you're trying to portraying. ...