ChangeTheWorld

Hi! Change here to change your life! Get i,t get it? Okay I'll stop. So just from your first paragraph I see a lot of short sentences. Short sentences can ...

Here as requested! You're lucky you posted so close to review day, you'll gets lots of reviews for sure :) Remember ANYTHING I say is usually just suggestion and can ...

Hey Paige! How are you? Review time :) She had many diaries. But, there was one diary with the cover worn slightly more than all the others. That diary was ...

Hey! I'm gonna review this :) I usually review as I go so tell me if I start to babble. So yeah, the "your v.s. "you're" thing is really easy ...

Ay! Review time :) So to start off, this is marked and it seems to be written as a short story. Because of this I'm confused at why it's formatted ...

Review time :) Even though my eyes hurt I'm so tiredddd. Hope this helps. As if thinking the exact thing So this sounds a tiny bit weird. I think it ...

WOOOOOO! Go time everybody! :) I covered my face with my eyes This is a funny image. But you mean hands right? without my face turning fifty shades of red ...

Hola! I'm back :) So Malachi fixed most of them but it's spelled "awhile" instead of "awile." I'm also a little distracted from the content by all the dialogue tags. ...

Review time! Aren't you excited? :) Philip’s voice was deep and loud, especially at a time like this. Small thing, but I think this should be "too deep and too ...

REVIEW SUCKAH!!!!! I mean hi. Okay so I didn't really find any grammar or structure things that needed to be fixed so that's great. I love all the names, they're ...

HI! I'm gonna review this okay? :D The wind blows as the soul sinks slowly vanishing into nothing. So I think this is missing a comma. Depending on what you ...

Hi! I'm going to review this poem :) I've took a person I'm pretty sure this is improper. It should be "taken" instead of "took." I'm also not really sure ...

Define love. That's what most people find hardest to define. Love. This first part feels just a smidge redundant. I think you should start with "Love." and than say the ...

AAAAHHHHH! :D Hey *nods all cool and stuff* Wat up. "I can't remember what my line is!"I sigh and roll my eyes sky wards. I think after the dialogue you ...

Here as requested. I hope you're not sorry you asked :D I'm that girl. I wanna be that girl. I've decided that it's time to give up. So these first ...