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Haha yeah lol thanks! i think it goes better..(: thank you .. x

Thanks a lot..will correct the mistakes and try and improve ! :D i actually agree, vernon, i didn't know what i should put for the name and a friend suggested ...

Haha yeah, i lost the file i saved it on lol Thanks..Ill change it straight away! :D

Hey , thanks for the comments. i do agree that the rainbow part can be confusing, there is a story behind it though. try to think of it from a ...

Hey haha i see you have quite a few positive and negative comments.. i really liked this, even though it was written for school, a year ago. your other poems ...

Awwwwwww That Was amazing I loved that! :D I got no critiques though...really great!

I really like this and like the rythm used, also. I really like that it can also be seen as a possible break-up..how someone might feel if they have broken ...

WOW, that was really good!! very short and effective.=] i agree with niteowl-ont the fifth line the And doesn't need to be there. =) x

I really liked this! although, short it got straight to the point. very powerful. great job! :D

i think this poem was pretty amazing.. i love how you have compared the boy to a statue ... Kissing a statue with wooden lips and metal eyes would feel ...