Chanahbanana

I agree with the other people, i think it's a little too cliche..but, i do like the last 3 lines of the last stanza. :) I think love is the ...

Hey ! Welcom to YWS :D anyways.. i think that this idea was really good, and i see where you are coming from, but i feel that your poem doesn't ...

I absolutely loved this poem! :D i loved how you have portrayed the character and anorexia itself. My favourite lines.. Mirror Mirror let me cry. Soon my tears will all ...

I really love this poem so much. i think its my favourite of yours. On the other side of this wall, A person sighs, Watching this child grow up And ...

I saw the title and it was very catching-good start :P the poem was really good and really effective. i really enjoyed it and for some reason i liked the ...

I Liked this, although, i have to agree with niteowl when she says that love is different for other people. i think it is very well written and shows how ...

i agree with Leja, i think that the poem is sweet, and the girl you plan to read it to or have already read it to, will appreciate it- but ...

although i dont know what your first draft was..i think you must have improved greatly! this poem is very powerful and effective. i like how you have portrayed this person-the ...