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Re: night
Hey CesareBorgia, here for a review This will be a short review, seeing as this was a short poem. The night was black and blue like an eye being punched ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Eight
Hey CesareBorgia here for a review, I just wanted to say: what happened? Incestuous... wierd, but at the same time I like it. Not the incest part, the originality. I've ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Seven
Hey CesareBorgia, here for a review. As you may know, I have been following your novel for quite some time. I want to say that I LOOOVE this novel. I ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: In The Darkness
Hey CesareBorgia, here for a review. I loved this poem, but there are some qualms, and literary fallacies. :wink: But for all intensive purposes, I still like the poem. Here ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Sebessia
Hey CesareBorgia here for a review, I noticed how this is a short piece, and it reminds me of how short my works are, but enough about me. This review ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Stronger: Prologue
Hey CesareBorgia here for a review, First I want to say: Welcome to YWS. Secondly, where did you get the names Jezebel from? I've never read or heard of it ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 2
Hey CesareBorgia here for another review, I'm sorry I never got to review your other chapter :( But I'm here to review this one. I just have to say that ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Traitor Game
Hey Cesare here for a review, I know you may think that you were never going to get reviews on this again, but I couldn't help but read it. I ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Six
Hey CesareBorgia here for a review, I'm back for another review. Seeing as I have already read the bonus ending, I already know that Durriken dies. The reviews are kind ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 5-1)
Hey CesareBorgia here for a review, I love how you seem to be active in this novel. I have been reading it, just haven;t reviewed, from here on out, I ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Monster
Hey Cessy here for a review, I loved this poem. It was very poetic and emotional. I do have some qualms though. Nitpicks/Questions. I burn within my regrets. This line ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Loneliness
Hey Olessea, I'm here for a review, I saw you write this, so this will be an easy review: Loneliness is a horrible thing. It follows you day and night. ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Face Scratch
Hey Cesare here for a review, I love how this poem is formatted. I suck at formatting poems. I also like the word choices! Now I must commence to nitpicks. ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Bonus Ending
Hey Cesare, here for a review: I know I'm not finished the story, but I just couldn't resist =[. So Durriken dies? I have a couple of questions. A bonus ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Stagnation
Hey Cesare here for a review, I love the title of the poem ,"Stagnation" it was a really good title choice. I also love your description and word diction. I ...
Apr 16, 2014
