Celticmusicgirl

Hi, i'm Celticmusicgirl and I will be reviewing your work today. I really like your idea of a Left Behind/ NCIS crossover. I love both series. Also, I am so ...

Alright. Let me know when you post more.

Anytime !

whatever Chris!

no problem at all

oops hit the submit button too soon sorry! Overall this was really good. I must say good job! I can tell you felt what the characters felt while writing this. ...

I shall focus my review on spelling, grammar, punctuation, and how if flows and makes sense. first: instead of premises how about campus because when you say premises it sounds ...

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fair enough. It is your work you do what you like with it. I understand now that that is your characters personality. Also, if you do not mind I also ...

Thanks for your honesty this is my first fantasy story I need all the help I can get!

Sure I'd be happy to thank you for the review

Alright this is great so far. I am going to check out part 2. The other reviewers have already pointed out all the errors I see.

the only thing i noticed in these sogn lyrics is that i see where the chorus starts but whee does it end? her is what i do i put a ...

so in the begining just start with the family moving to the U.S. or what do you think would be a good starting sentence? This is based on the T.V. ...

wow bondgirl your story is amazing you are an excellent writer i think you will make a great author one day!!!! thanks for posting