CatherinKanya

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Thanks for the review. Well I will be describing the characters in different chapters as there is a lot to describe about them and they have a long and confusing ...

Thank you very muck. About the description of the characters, I thought I could describe the characters slowly in different chapters cause I don't want to reveal a lot in ...

Hey green tulip. I really liked your poem. It is something that a lot of people can relate to. And you really described it well. I didn't find any fault ...

Now i totally get it. Great poem. 'And I being to lose faith in the one I had believed in', you accidentally wrote being instead of begin. Anyway, keep up ...

Hey there sanity. This is the first work of yours that I am reading and it is just amazing. A very vivid picture you have given there. I just loved ...

Hey there dreamy. Thank you for the review. Well I see that you are quite confused with the last line like I feared. The last lone that italicized is supposed ...

Hey there. Its CatherinKanya. I was just awestruck when I read the poem. It is just an amazing piece. I love it. I just enjoyed it and don't think I ...

I really did not want it to sound it I was ranting about the existence of god and I am quite sure I am not. But if it really looks ...

I actually exaggerated the part about my mom. Thought it could be more interesting :). But i really appreciate the time you have spent to explain. It was really kind. ...

Oh okay, i am really sorry. It's my bad. If you actually wanted it to be short I have no right to question that. But it was just amazing. Sorry ...

Thank you. Its nice to hear you liked it :)

Thank you very much.I really wouldn't mind if you wrote down the complaints. I can really try to learn from them. But anyway thank you for the review

You just mentioned i could have divided my poem into stanzas. I wanted to do the same but didn't really know how to break the lines.

Thanks a lot for encouraging me. I will take in all you pointers and work towards perfection.