CastlesInTheSky

Thankyou so much for reading, Angel. You're all too too lovely for persevering with this. xxx

Thankyou so much for reading, Demeter. You're all so helpful. xxx

Thankyou so much for reading, Demeter. You've been wonderful, persevering with this all the way through. And in less than a day you got through 10 Chapters! Methinks a hug ...

Aww Demeter you're so sweet! Nothing to critiqu? :wink: So what do you call all the amazing points you've just been specifying in your critique then? I say - definetly ...

Of course you were of help, Demeter! As I keep repeating, you underestimate your reviewing skills immensely! Thanks so much. xxx

Wow thankyou guys! I really wasn't expecting that, since I haven't written poems for such a long time. Thankyou for reading! ^_^

You're welcome June. And that's exactly why I was torn about that rhyming problem - I doubt you could find a better substitute for what you're trying to convey; so ...

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Hey Adna! :D It would be absolutely lovely of you to read more; and thankyou so much for the review. xxx

Awww; Kirsten. (: You are too, too, too, lovely to me. One of my favourite reviewers. Thankyou, you can't imagine how much your reviews make my day. ^_^ *huggles* Sarah ...

Thankyou so much, Alainna. I understand about the whole 'she' thing; it's because I've only just started calling her Sarah and now I'm juggling between both names. It is repeated ...

Thanks so much Merry (: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I will try to post Chapter 8 up as soon as possible, I promise. Thankyou again for following Broken. ...

Hey Merry ! The guy was her dad, presumably. Maybe I was a bit too vague, I forgot the reader didn't know the plan I had in my head. Thankyou ...

Aww thanks so much Kirsten (: That really, really helped because I was having real confidence issues with this particular chapter. Thankyou again for reading. xxx

Well, I suppose it was awful. I admit defeat ashamedly. :D *Hangs Head*