CastlesInTheSky

Hi Demeter! Here as requested. I must say - I like the title. :lol: Very witty. Now for nitpicks! Slowly disappearing into white fluff, a sudden flash of ice sticks. ...

Hey, there, IHighton! I am so ready for this. -squeals- Somehow, Laura had known it would be May who rang that time. By no means was she psychic, or in ...

Hello Snoink! I have to say, I really enjoyed this poem. There was something beautiful about it concealed between the words. The picture looks like this: it is flat and ...

Hey June! I've been longing to critique something of yours for ages, so here goes! (By the way, it's only with excellent pieces of work that I get nit-picky, because ...

The idea for this short story came to me in the shower, and I hurried to write it down. It's about how rumours can destroy somebodies life. It's partly based ...

I know it's really short, and that's pretty inexcusable after such a long wait. But hopefully it'll tide you over until I write some more. Hi there, KJ! I don't ...

Wh...aa...a? *lip trembles.* But I was going to get here first, I was. *hangs head in shame.* Anyway, Areida, this is even better than last time, which I didn't think ...

Please hold nothing back!!! I can`t get better unless I know what I`m doing wrong!! Okay; I'm not being harsh or anything. But you'd be taken a whole lot more ...

Your writing is refreshing - very original and unique. It reminds me a bit of the style in which Lemony Snicket wrote A Series of Unfortunate Events - have you ...

~Hey, everyone. Here's part 6. Negative reviews are welcomed. Enjoy!~ Alrighty! I've been reading all the way through so far but everyone's pointed out everything, so I thought I'd start ...

Hello Merry (: This was an amazingly tense chapter, my eyes were glued to the words the whole time through. The tenseness wasn't achieved through blatant action happening in your ...

GAH!! I'd just written a really long review and then my computer lost it all! Darn it. I know it's short. Any ideas to make it longer? [/quote] Okay, so. ...

He told us to open our notebooks to a blank page and to start writing. He didn’t specify what to write about, just write . I stared at him as ...

[/b]A slightly ambiguous if not somewhat sketchy jotting that I wrote in five minutes. An example of my terrible attempts at poetry! Almost philosophical yet rather ambiguous. Make what you ...

The last dance, for her, was like dancing with a broom. This is a very good, unique image to start the story with. It was stiff and very unentertaining . ...