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Re: Entry one/?: Little Miss Horror Show
Thank you! I understand the structure issue, it said it saved well yet it didn't... Again thank you for all your tips
Jan 23, 2020 -
Re: A Delusion
I LOVE IT!!!❤️ The words are great and no grammar issues in my knowing. The only critic is I.Want.More! Im going to check your other stuff out too! The spacing ...
Jan 21, 2020 -
Re: Entry one/?: Little Miss Horror Show
Yeah
Jan 21, 2020 -
Re: Entry one/?: Little Miss Horror Show
"Luca! Dove tu ne abbiamo un altro!" Is Italian for "Luca where you at we got another!" Just to clarifiy
Jan 21, 2020 -
Re: Entry one/?: Little Miss Horror Show
Thank you so much! Id like to explain what she really is. Like what you said a demon, but she is also a manifistation of sorts. She can take human ...
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Re: A Persona
When is saw the title i was hooked! The meaning behind your words are deep and meaningful which the reader can relate to. I honestly really liked the details you ...
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: The Boy in The Window
I like how the story flows! Even thought some of it is choppy its hidden between the other pieces of flowing work. I like the story behind the boy in ...
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: goodbye.
I like how well this flows together! Even though ive never had a breakup ive had people back stab me and betray me before. I can see how the person ...
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: Witches and Queens
Wow! Really good word choice. I love how it all flows together too. Everything is true in this work of art
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: You Need to Read This.
Sorry it was meant to be a review lol
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: You Need to Read This.
Omg! I loved this! Lots of big words i dont even know how to pronounce but over all good story! I was on the edge of my seat waiting to ...
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: You Need to Read This.
Omg! I loved this! Lots of big words i dont even know how to pronounce but over all good story! I was on the edge of my seat waiting to ...
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: The Journal
This is really good! I cant even comprehend your level of excellency! I loved all of it yet need more detail on what the situation is. Good job making me ...
Jan 20, 2020
