CassandraInvisible

This was really beautiful. I'm totally impressed. If there are any mistakes, I didn't pick up on them (maybe because I'm in class and could be caught on here at ...

Thank you for all your reviews and suggestions. Memorizing not memorising Favorite not favourite I'm from NZ and we spell things a little differently here =D Quote: The minutes ticked ...

Actually, the MC came off as male to me, I don't know why. Yay! That's the effect I was going for. I get what you mean about the bluntness, I ...

I would add more in the story about the victim. Right now, there isn't a whole lot about the girl that took her life. You say they made fun of ...

I think I get what you're saying, the "show, don't tell" thing. I kind of thought that I'd do that with this poem, maybe because, being a personal issue, I ...

I like this [even though I couldn't fully grasp what it was about.] The rhyme scheme, to me, seems to work. I like the effect of the repetition too.

Thank you for your reviews, advice and for pointing out spelling errors ^^ However as for the rambling on bit I have a feeling you want to end this piece ...

Thank you for your thoughts, sometimes I make things a bit cliche >< I'm hoping to develop it more so that everything makes sense in the end =D

Well, I have a triumphant ending formulated in mind, I just havn't had the time to write it =] I'm going to work on a title, I just don't want ...

Haha. I rather like this. It's witty and you've managed to make something rather dull, rather interesting. The humour is subtle, I had to read it twice to fully get ...

I like the recurring 'But' at the start of every second line. It gives the poem a structure and rhythm. I've read stuff similar to this before, but the great ...

I recognize the title... I'm pretty sure I've read it, and it was amazing. Edit: Oh I love your signature. Sylvia Plath = brilliant.