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Hey, I absolutely loved this poem, your writing is so beautiful! I am left utterly heartbroken after reading this, thank you so much for posting it.

Hey, I edited the poem according to the criticism I received, please let me know what you think. I couldnt figure out how to add italics, but al tge words ...

Hey, thanks for your comment. The speaker is supposed to be sitting on one of those bench swings (hence the metal bars) and as she's swinging herself dust gathers because ...

Thanks for your review, and I'll try to answer some of your questions. Firstly, I agree that the word "nonchalantly" may not be very appropriate to describe the gathering of ...

Yeah, I know that feeling, and you portrayed it very well in your poem. And I'm glad that has passed and you've been able to see past the 'donts'. Im ...

Your welcome :) and thanks!!

Your welcome :) and thanks!!

Your welcome :) and thanks!!

Your welcome :) and thanks!

Your welcome :) and thanks!

Your welcome :) and thanks!

Hey, I love this poem, I can really identify with the speaker when they say "I retreated into endless verses of don'ts". It's my favourite line.

Hey, thanks for your reply. It was an acrostic poem but I think if your looking at it on your mobile it will just mess up the structure.