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Hi there GoldFlame! Here to review, as promised :) First impressions first. I really hope you're not really 12, because I wonder what you will be like (as a writer) ...

Hi Lucrezia! Calvinn here to review for you :) I'm so glad I'm the first reviewer! This is a really great piece - original and despite the fact that all ...

I get why you wanted me to read this BloodInk! It's perfect! A flawless piece of art done to perfection! This is what (I think), this site is all about ...

Hi there, defiant! First off - WOW, this is really good! Thank God for the lack of mistakes, grammatical and otherwise. I just picked this up randomly and boom - ...

Hi there Bloodink :) I did not read the prelude to this short story (I don't know if you wrote one, apologies if you did). Now, because of its length, ...

Hi there Ossum! Calvinn to review for you :) I hope you realise this is going to be a frank review. If there is something I feel could be improved, ...

Hey there! Calvinn to review for you :) I will apologise, first and foremost, for appearing (and perhaps being) harsh in my critique here. But if there's one thing I ...

Hey there, Calvinn to review! This is the first time I am reviewing poetry, but I had to read this! Don't eat my head off, but I'm not a huge ...

Hi Rosan! First off, your first chapter is really engaging. It gives us enough of the story to keep wanting more, yet not too much that you make the rest ...

Hi Kevikur, Calvinn to review again for you :) To be honest, I only looked up the author's name after having read the piece. I do not read romantic stuff, ...

Hey there Silverlock! Calvinn to review for you :) I was pleasantly surprised to find that your piece was well-balanced. Just the right length, you know your grammar (a great ...

Hi there Deanie :) Thank God this piece does not lack in grammar and vocabulary quality. I need a break from dottng the Is and crossing the Ts and just ...

Hi Drago! Calvinn here to review for you today :) O.K., so the first thing I notice is - you're telling us TOO much. You need to describe the scene ...

Hi there, Calvinn to review! I know it's been a long time since you wrote this, but right now I'm randomly going through short stories and whatnot, and decided to ...

Hey Catbug! This will be a rather short review I'm afraid, as I read this yesterday and can't remember what I wanted to nitpick. You had me from the word ...