Calligraphy

There is more than one lonesome dove. I mean there is the rest of the series in the movie version. I have never read the book... A. S.

my adrenaline rushes this line is awkward. Instead, you could try something like: "I feel a rush of adrenaline", or "My adrenaline levels skyrocket." But those are just ideas. I ...

Hey thanks, sorry I just saw this :D

I am assuming this is in the form of villanelle? I have never read a poem in this form before so I am sorry, but I can't review it. I ...

They are probably going to slaughter the Maximum Ride series... Apparenly they wanna use the girl who played Bella and the dude who played Edward as Max and Fang. If ...

I agree with everyone else. You lack emotion because you tell us what is happening. I want to know what this person is thinking about the dance. A. S.

I agree with kingolions! Great poem. You used the repetition really well.

I love the Giver, the first time I read it thought I was really little and it seriously creeped me out.

Everything is soaked. This is the only line I didn't like. It feels so short and bla after and before the rest of your awesome imagery. A. S.

I think a name having to do with spring love might be good. Because they fell in love in spring then slowly fell out of it then it was winter ...

I love Charlotte Brontë, but have not heard of this! *requests from library* :D

Thank you a bunch guys! I am editing it and revising it a lot. You probably won't see it up for a while because when I revise I revise over ...

Thank you guys. I am now thinking about rewriting the whole poem because I suck at revising when it comes to poetry, but I will try. The last line is ...

Thanks, you might not like it because I wrote this in about seven minutes and didn't read over it before I posted :D Did you get what the poem was ...

Thanks.