Calligraphy

Well, at first glance I see you don't really have a rhyming scheme. You seem to be trying to make one though. I think you should have none at all ...

O.K. I haven't read the other reviews so sorry if I repeat anything. too short of shirt This just doesn't sound right, maybe: too short a shirt. but too long ...

I laughed, I bawled You choked, and stalled, I waved my hand up, I couldn’t breathe- These first lines caught my attention. You just sat there, And silently seethed. Tears ...

Dop. The ink dripped Again and again Such monotonous tones In brutal destruction of an otherwise pristine white carpet. This line is really good, but is so long in comparison ...

I'm surprised that I didn't run over a squirrel or something on my way to work the next day, because the road in front of me was the last thing ...

I am here to review like asked :D It is so sad that you don't have a single one. I usually don't like being the first reviewer, but I will ...

She liked the way the T-shirt hung from his shoulders. It was blue like water, and like You repeat like a lot here. Maybe the first time you should say ...

If I repeat anything it is because I haven't read the other review. :) sorry. Grammar , things I like , and comments. In a costume of white trimming and ...

Written for a friend. The energy keeps dwindling from day to day The will to keep trying is just fading away To keep breaking down walls is a feat too ...

I actually really like this! It flows nicely and all the rhymes work together. You stayed on track and described them really well for your audience. (I'm assuming that is ...

First I like the concept, and I haven't read any of the other reviews so sorry If I repeat them. I like how you compared him to glass. (For some ...

I really like this and the concept hasn't been over done. It is so true and I like the rhythm. Keep up the good work. :D Spelling corrections in bold ...

This is one of those WOW poems I read over a few times just so I can hear the words in my head again. Frankly I love it and wouldn't ...

Hi, the first thing I want to say is I like the poem. Keep that in mind as you read the review. The second thing I would like to say ...

Hi and welcome to YWS. Actually I didn't look when you joined I just saw that you only had two review so if you have been on here for a ...