Calibur

I really enjoyed this story it was humorous and well written.

I made the changes everybody suggested thanks for the help guys.

Thanks for the help you guys that is going to improve my story a lot.

No it's not weird i understad what you meant.

I don't know what i was thinking when i posted the second part here sorry for the confusion.

I know i'm taking way too long to get to the point but i will get there in my next post and once again thanks for the advice.

Thanks for the advice i will get to work right now.

Wow that is pretty good you give it great detail and that poem can relate to so many people out there.

Many years have passed since the day the demon children have been told of their destiny. One hundred years to be exact but, the demon children do not grow as ...

Ok I'll remember that.

Thanks for the advice my writing skills are not that good quite yet but with every body's help here i'm shure it will progress very fast.

Yeah thats what I did. Once again thanks very much for the advice.

Thanks for the advice if you don't mind I'm going to use the re-written paragraph you did it's a lot better and easier to read.

It is very well written I belive it has a very good chance of winning.

Yes I agree that is a big flaw in my story. I'm doing some serious revising on my story based on everyones advice so the new and improved version will ...