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Caitlynn

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Girl of my dream

    I love the meaning, or rather the concept of the poem, and the imagery you use. "Who cannot fall loving with her?" I feel like this line doesn't flow very ...

    Dec 18, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: glass

    That twist though. So I love the imagey, and the consistency shown within this poem. The poem had me hooked right from the beginning, and the ending is excellent. Dark ...

    Dec 18, 2018
  • Lyrics » General, Dramatic Re: Breaking

    So I'll first say, it's really relatable. Everyone, at one time or another has felt this feeling. The consistency is nice. Though I do believe the structure and flow need ...

    Dec 18, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blame

    I like the fact that you cited the work, giving credit is very important. I like the idea, and do agree that the dress codes can get very ridiculous, I ...

    Dec 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: To The Woman Who Sang Roses

    I love the concept and emotion thrown into this poem, it shows how you can be naive when you're young, however some parts are read a little awkwardly, and can ...

    Dec 17, 2018


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