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Re: Girl of my dream
I love the meaning, or rather the concept of the poem, and the imagery you use. "Who cannot fall loving with her?" I feel like this line doesn't flow very ...
Dec 18, 2018 -
Re: glass
That twist though. So I love the imagey, and the consistency shown within this poem. The poem had me hooked right from the beginning, and the ending is excellent. Dark ...
Dec 18, 2018 -
Re: Breaking
So I'll first say, it's really relatable. Everyone, at one time or another has felt this feeling. The consistency is nice. Though I do believe the structure and flow need ...
Dec 18, 2018 -
Re: Blame
I like the fact that you cited the work, giving credit is very important. I like the idea, and do agree that the dress codes can get very ridiculous, I ...
Dec 17, 2018 -
Re: To The Woman Who Sang Roses
I love the concept and emotion thrown into this poem, it shows how you can be naive when you're young, however some parts are read a little awkwardly, and can ...
Dec 17, 2018
