Cailey

Luster is a better title. :) And yeah- I can see is a bit dinosaurish. :D No writers are useless. and I like giving encouragement. I think it's important. :) ...

I have had so many issues with formatting on this site. it isn't harder to mess it up, trust me. :D

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Ouch. Not even distracted. You must be a superhero. And yes. Physical exhaustion. I like it. I will hopefully remember to go and add more about the physical aspect of ...

That awkward moment when I step in all excited to review this- and then there's nothing here. But you know, deleted is just such a deep, meaningful word. I think ...

I usually write more during the day- because I love asleep and am usually in bed by 9 ;) haja! Thank you! and I bought the cup at a thrift ...

Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you liked it!!

Yeah, I guess that was my problem. I didn't really have a theme in mind- just a hedgehog. Usually I try to put more meaning into the poem, but this ...

I have experienced those formatting problems. like when I publish a poem and it comes out all in one thick chunk instead of lines and stanzas... agh. formatting. :D

I am so glad! I like to hear that my review helped. If you ever need another review just let me know. And don't worry about it, dialogue is hard ...

I guess the caps are a style choice, huh. :) And that makes sense, the format often gets mixed up on YWS.

You're welcome! I hope this was helpful!!

Thank you for the review!! I will work on those things and make it fit together a little bit more.

Thank you for the review!! I will work on those things and make it fit together a little bit more.

I always complain when people don't have enough punctuation. So I can definitely see myself putting too much. :| Note to self: don't go punctuation happy! Thank you tons for ...