Caesar

this is cool

feel free to link chapter one.

a mighty fine damn indeed

if this were a work of art, I wouldn't have critiqued it ;) the ability of a short writer lies in condensing great amounts of information with efficacy, yes.

damn.

dude, please, please, please split this into individual chapters. One chapter per post. It's only fair.

Hi there Neo, you shouldn't be throwing this at us. A history textbook will not make me interested in the next book. Why should I care? Give me one good ...

I'm glad I could help!

the rhythm to this is practically musical. Great job. When I read it it sounds almost like a childish nursery rhyme, which creates a very nice contrast with the theme ...

you may wanted to include that sooner, to avoid this issue entirely.

the pleasure is mine, sorry I was confusing when I said pushing off... you get the gist xD had pushed off, pushed, the result is still the same. Cheers and ...

I was going to review this, but then I took it down. Will review it later.

the pleasure is mine

It is fine ^.^ I hope my review was clear.

excuse me for using the word smut incorrectly. Sure, I'll give you a review.