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Re: planet of the apes and other movies that are hard to watch
First, let me express my sincere condolences for the loss of your father. Losing a loved one is not easy, trust me, I know. Now as for the review, I'm ...
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Re: O dear Hotels, stop being ironic!
I agree with this poem and can understand your suffering. Here are some things that may help with emphasis and structure: For the line ""Why?',you ask-They live near the beach" ...
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Re: My smile's just a pose
Well, I'm not going to say that it's depressing because I want this to be an honest and neutral review. I want to begin with the, of course, the beginning. ...
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Re: from the eyes of a chicken
Wow, you're very good at capturing perspectives. It's great to see that your ability to jump from a human's POV when writing the title to that of a chicken's when ...
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Re: Fish In The Water
Hello! Cadmium Antimny is here to offer his insights. So initially I read the poem and didn't have much to say, but then it started to sink in. I like ...
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Re: Love in decaying hearts: part seven
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Jan 7, 2024
This piece offers a captivating exploration of supernatural elements and personal struggles. 'There. Stop right there. Cassidy is in this house and so are the ghosts,' Azrail said." "The author ... -
Re: Never enough
Wow, this is great. Your poem reflects a deep emotional pain and a profound sense of familial disconnection. From my end, it seems that the narrator is expressing feelings of ...
Jan 7, 2024