Cadi

Hi Trident! Thanks for the review. I definitely see your points, re vagueness and pointless food. And I'd completely forgotten to read this with the LGBT nature of it as ...

If you click Edit Work, and put in line breaks from there, do they stick around?

Thanks for the review - and thanks for catching the apostrophe. I should get better proofreading goggles.

Hey there, So, I was going to review this, but I couldn't think of anything constructive to say. I like it, all of it. Simple, but wonderful. And, well, I ...

Thank you very much, psudi!

What, thinking? I don't think I can do that ;)

Thanks for your thoughts on the matter. It was certainly an interesting perspective. I would, though, like to question your assumption that they were outside in the second stanza. I ...

If you're interested in the structure, it's called a rondeau. In Flanders Fields is probably the most famous example of it - I highly recommend looking that one up!

Yes, it was in my NaPo thread ^^ One of two I liked enough to drag up to actual Lit Work status. I'm glad you like it - thanks for ...

Thanks very much!