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Thank you so much for your kind review! It gives me more confidence and i would love to get round to reading some of yours too! I'm glad you can ...

Thank you for your review it means alot and maybe i will write a short story to go with it, i really like that idea XD

Thanks so much for the review! it really helped! :D

First off, I love the repetition of Fred's name at the beginning. It gives you the information that tells you that this about Fred's death. I also love the graphic ...

Wow! You can feel all the emotion! It would sound awesome with music to it! :)

This is Totally awesome! Nice work!

You can definately feel the emotion in this! Although it is short you can feel your expression! nice work buddy! :)

Thanks for the help. It was a rough one shot but i will keep all your advice in mind. Thanks alot! :D

This awsome redvine! Its not a sad song at all really. It would sound Totally Awsome with some music! Nice one! p.s i love your signature! :D

AJ man! This is amazing my favourite yet! i love the simplicity yet the impact it holds! Well done! :)

This is just awesome! It;'s so descriptive i can easily picture it. i knew who you were talking about without reading the title! You are just indescribable! Nice job can't ...