CSheperd

Wow...this one was great hahaha Loved the punchline.

Eh it was alright, kind of just waided through it. Felt borderline too descriptive.

Gotta say, I really liked it. The characters were well formulated. Your descriptions were next to immaculate. It reminded me alot of the torture scene in Reservoir Dogs but only ...

For being so short that really captivated me. It was pretty descriptive and i really could get a feel for the main character. I hope there is more that follows.

it was pretty good, but there wasn't much emotion to it, not trying to sound like a broken record. The plot was pretty stiff with little detail on it.

I thought it was pretty good. The description was pretty vivid as was the character detail.The character interraction was great too. The plot didn't really draw me in too much, ...

i thought that was very good. It had such nice description to itand i got the arizona trailer park in the summer kind of feeling from it. I was hooked ...

Three words, pretty damn good

It wasn't too bad. As far as poems go i liked it. C.S.

I gotta say that was pretty fun to read. I got a nice calvin and hobbes vibe from it. I enjoyed it and it was easy to follow. Keep it ...

i thought it was pretty good, and i'm always a big fan of apocolyptc stories. The description in it was incredible as well. It was a very enjoyable read and ...

pretty damn good man. It had that gripping terror of being caught after the fact and things just going downhill. You captured every man's fear of cheating, getting caught, and ...

I thought it was a pretty good read but had a hard time paying attention to it mainly because of the romance portion of it. It wasn't bad or anything, ...

there really isn't much to get out of reading this. It was pretty short but i still had to kind of force my way through it.

I thought that was pretty damn good, and i'm not normally one for fantasy. I can't really find any problem with it, thought it was all good to read. You ...