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Okay, so I made some edits. I definitely still need to work on the ending and slow it down a little bit, but I made some adjustments for now. Thanks ...

Edits done. Feedback would be warmly accepted so I could do some more. :)

Okay- so I actually finished this now, with a great deal of tweaking. There are obviously some parts that could use some serious work, but now I actually have the ...

Okay, so I did an edit. I still want to take a lot out, but I just have a really hard time deciding what... gosh I'm an imagery addict. >.

Thanks so much for the input guys- I tried reworking it a bit, and am going to work on a bit more I think, and try to create some more ...

I'm going to come back later and do a proper review, but I just wanted to say that this is super awesome, and you have a ridiculous amount of talent.

You're one of my new favorites, and you should change nothing. 'Nuff said.

This is freakin' amazing. "She tasted like cat. It was glorious." You are a god.

I hate acrostic poems, but this poem is plain awesome. So kudos to you. :D

Awesome piece, though it's technically senry, as it doesn't deal with season. I still loved it though. c: -Coral-

I must say, I'm American, and pretty much all I have to say in response is "Agreed." -Coral- P.S. Football (American soccer) is 10x better than American football.

Where the Red Fern Grows, but only because it made me cry so hard. :)

Best. Limerick. Ever. No joke. I loved this. Yay! :D

This. Was. Amazing. I think that's all that needs to be said. :) -Coral-

So wait.. is he a zombie?