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First of all, love this: great job. I love this piece, though I think that you could probably play with some parts of it, and it make it even better. ...

Hi there, here as requested! :) So, I liked this-- you put a really nice twist on the end and your rhymes were good. You might consider putting in some ...

Jealousy is seeping from my pores. First of all, great job. Now, the review (not that I actually have that much to say). That crumpled green line offers false hope, ...

AAAH. I'd written a big ol' review, and my computer killed it. Okay, well I went through stanza by stanza, and said essentially the same thing. And, because I'm heading ...

Excellent! Okay, I'm going to give kind of a short review, as I don't have a ton of points to make. First of all, I loved the story. Really original, ...

This was good; very powerful. If you don't mind, I'm going to do a more stylistic/conceptual review than anything else. So, your line breaks are extremely distracting and make the ...

First of all, this is actually senryu. As many above users mentioned, this isn't actually about any season, so it's referred to as senyru, which still carries the structure of ...

Hi there! :) So, I'm sorry to say that my review will be quite different from the ones I skimmed above. Personally, I found this well written and I loved ...

Hi there, here as requested! :) So, I want to start off by saying this: most of this poem is composed of images and is then wrapped up towards the ...

First off: excellent. But, I would expect no less from you. Now, I found this piece interesting. It's obviously about suicide, but it's presented very differently from most "Oh, woe ...

Orcs, by Stan Nicholls. I know, most of you would probably back away from the book just after seeing the title, but I'd read something by the author before, which ...

I just want to start off with this: great job. I love the vocabulary you've incorporated. You have some really great words here, and some nice imagery. Kay. Onto the ...

I apologize for my recent laziness. I'm workin' on it. ;) Okay. On to the actual review. Let's see if I can say anything coherent. One morning I woke up ...

Hey there, here as requested. Just keep in mind, I had novels on that list of evil because I'm no good with them. :) So, I'm just going to dive ...

I want to start off by saying this: this is excellent. I haven't read much poetry from you, but I really hope to in the future. You definitely have talent ...