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I thought a lot about this poem, Gal. Most of your work passes me by, sometimes I get it, sometimes I don't want to go through the effort of getting ...

Hi there! So, I love the premise of this and the writing style, but felt like a couple of things were missing. Where is the build up emotionally to this? ...

So, I read this awhile ago, and it took me a while to decide how I feel about it. Honestly, stories about cutting and suicide and all that stuff generally ...

"posture" is my favorite from you in a long while. I have to echo blackbird in that I think you're starting to stretch out from the rut you found yourself ...

Hey there! So I think that there were a couple of things that could be played with in this poem to make it really shine as I'm sure you want ...

When you ask all these questions, it makes you sound confused and not much else. They aren't thought provoking for the reader, and they aren't even that relevant to your ...

Honestly... this didn't touch me at all. I like the idea of the lamb falling in love with the lion, sure, that works, but you need to be more creative ...

Kylan, you're good. You know this. But this piece is... frankly, almost disappointing from you. It's still wonderfully done, don't get me wrong, but personally, I wouldn't consider it up ...

This was wonderfully done; the simplicity of plot, the emotion and background given were all superb. However, there were some definite things to be worked on. A great deal of ...

Hey there, jalmoc! Here to do a review for you today. :3 So, the sentiment and obvious emotion behind this poem is nice. However, a lot of work needs to ...

Hey there, tiger! So, I think that this has potential; maybe for the framework, maybe more for concept than anything else, but I think you can use this as a ...

Hey there, sleepthief! So, I think this has potential. Unfortunately, you've drowned this out so much in trying to achieve a specific tone/style that it doesn't quite work. First off, ...

Hey there molly! So, I'm gonna give you a critique more on your style rather than the content of this actual piece. First off: Showing vs Telling. I know, I ...

Hey there Kylan. So, to be perfectly honest, I'm a fan, so I'm probably not going to have a lot to say. (But yay for California!) i pick jovian fruit ...

Why do I keep trying out poetry? :P Because you have so, so much potential. Okay, Lava, so let's get started. First point: your diction is wonderful. Really, really wonderful. ...