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I too am an over-helper of other people. However, I didn't understand some of your logic here. Helping other people doesn't end bullying, it isn't an addiction- you can do ...

So, I'm going to give a really lame review. Sorry in advance. I really liked this piece- the language was excellent, and the word selection was nice. The imagery was ...

I'm going to come back and do a proper review later. But I just wanted to say that 1) This was awesome. I look forward to more with perhaps a ...

Wonderful concept- I think that at parts, it felt a little forced, and the rhythm wasn't too easy to get a hold of, but otherwise, this was nicely done. The ...

The tone in this piece seems to fluctuate quite a bit. I would try to be a bit more consistent with your use of language; each word you use reflects ...

Kay, I'm sorry now, cause I'm gonna gush. I loved this piece- it was simple, there wasn't much going on, but it was powerful and very complete. The backstory was ...

Wonderful use of emotion; you've really reached a depth that can actually connect with the reader in a powerful way. So great job on that. The rhyming scheme was done ...

I love it! Aside from the originality of the structure, your words themselves held a refreshing genuine-ness to them. I love the personality in it, and the way your own ...

Wonderful piece, but as retro said, there is something more than that needs to be woven into the poem structurally in order to make it an English sonnet: You have ...

I like this- you unfolded the story very nicely, developed the characters honestly and modestly... I don't really have anything to critique on this. It was interesting, it was simple, ...

This is wonderful. I just want to start off my gushing with that :) It, for some reason, really reminded me of Murakami's writing style. Which is a very, very, ...

Love it; it's simple and soft, a gentle little musing that everyone can relate to. Very bare-bones imagery, but effective. I would consider playing with your punctuation a bit; the ...

Okay: so something kinda funny at first. I moved, with my mother, three years ago, to the Czech Republic. Right next to Poland. :) Anywho- onto the piece. I think ...

I think that the voice and the delayed despair could be a bit stronger, but overall, this was a really nice piece. I love the concept, and the execution was ...

Okay; I'm not gonna lie. I think I missed something in this poem. I'm terrible at finding deeper meanings in stuff. >.< However, having said that, I still thoroughly enjoyed ...