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I like this: it's very concise, very simple, but conveys a lot and carries a story. I have some points I'd like to make though, most of which are nitpicks ...

So, if you don't mind, I'm going to do more of a stylistic review than anything else. I want to start off by saying that I'm quite bias when it ...

Hey there :) So, I wanted to say that I found the rhyme scheme really interesting for this one-- I haven't quite decided yet if I like it or not. ...

Why hello, first customer! ^_^ Now, on to business. The magnificent hall is filled to each seat, they sit comfortably on chairs of crimson velvet – Really nice opening. This ...

Beautiful piece- however, I do have a little bit to say about how you could improve it. The lights at night, The phrasing here is a little too unoriginal for ...

Hey there, Skinsy- sorry it took me so long to get here. Exams week. >.> Okay, so it looks like you got a bunch of super-duper reviews from our super-duper ...

Okay, I am lame for two reasons: 1) I didn't get the meaning of the title. I apologize. But it really reminded me of Waldo. :) 2) I didn't really ...

Hi there, Niko! I'm finally here- sorry it took me so long. :) Okay, so I'm going to make a couple of points, and then head right into a line-by-line ...

This was not what I expected. The ending came as kind of a shock to me, because the tone was so different from the rest of the piece. I can't ...

Wait- let me catch my breath. I'm still kind of in a state of awe. Okay. So, this was lovely. It was beautifully written, and the way your mind work ...

Hi there-- so I think this is good. You have nice imagery and emotion, and a nice word choice to portray what you want to. However, I have a suggestion, ...

So, this was great. I love the character development, especially with the principal. The simple ridiculousness of each situation being presented was excellent. There were a couple of things I ...

You've created a really nice landscape for emotion-- the repetition and word choice both reflect that really well. However, I do have some thoughts as to how you could improve ...

Hi there! :) So, I want to start off with the first two lines, which REALLY reminded my of Assassin's Creed. :) A blade in the crowd... That's what we ...

I found the ending kind of funny: not because of the actual piece. The actual piece was powerful, and very serious. But as I read it, Tom Waits sang "when ...