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Buranko

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    But I will edit a bit, some more imagery would surely fit in very nicely. I reread it and you are right about the lack of images. The official meaning ...

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    This is a nice way for people to understand the nuances of haikus and why the 5 7 5 is just a mere guideline, what matters is the essence of ...

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    I knew some people would pick on my style of haiku'ing. Like there is traditional verse and modern verse there is haiku and modern haiku. I have read both ways ...

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Perseus

    Thanks for review

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Perseus

    I'm really glad to hear that

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Perseus

    Comb has a lot of meanings. One of them is the zoological one and it's the fleshy red part on a chicken's head

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy

    Yea, I see what you mean, however I have no clue how to give that bang. Next poem %uD83D%uDE01

    Sep 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy

    Hehe I like how your name is Oceans and you reviewed my poems that contain the water element. Thanks for the reviews %uD83D%uDE01

    Sep 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy

    Thank you for the wonderful review Yea, I'm still working on my punctuation and I agree it can be vague at times. Regarding my stanzas, the random number of lines ...

    Sep 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Chickens and Dragons

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    Hehe this is such a great poem. I have recently seen a cartoon that featured chickens as the creatures that resembled dinosaurs most, so when you compared them to dragons ...

    Sep 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Drowning in paper

    Thank you for taking the time for writing this awesome review! You gave me some really nice tips, like that one with shortening my lines. Thought a little about it ...

    Sep 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: ​A Pack of Wolves Serenades a Cloudy Sky

    Truly the raven lord

    Sep 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Tale of Souls - Chapter Three

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    Hello there fellow writer . Really nice story. I always loved the fantasy genre with a war like feeling. I feel that the preparations so far are the perfect amount ...

    Sep 4, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: First day of autumn

    Yea, I dunno why i used sweared instead of swore. Nice review, thank you for taking the time to write it

    Sep 4, 2020


something I have been thinking about ever since I saw the Super Mario Bros movie is how once I took a "what Nintendo character are you" quiz and I got Waluigi.
— Elinor