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Re: Haiku
But I will edit a bit, some more imagery would surely fit in very nicely. I reread it and you are right about the lack of images. The official meaning ...
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Re: Haiku
This is a nice way for people to understand the nuances of haikus and why the 5 7 5 is just a mere guideline, what matters is the essence of ...
Sep 7, 2020 - Re: Haiku Sep 7, 2020
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Re: Haiku
I knew some people would pick on my style of haiku'ing. Like there is traditional verse and modern verse there is haiku and modern haiku. I have read both ways ...
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Re: Perseus
Thanks for review
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Re: Perseus
I'm really glad to hear that
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Re: Perseus
Comb has a lot of meanings. One of them is the zoological one and it's the fleshy red part on a chicken's head
Sep 7, 2020 -
Re: Happy
Yea, I see what you mean, however I have no clue how to give that bang. Next poem %uD83D%uDE01
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Re: Happy
Hehe I like how your name is Oceans and you reviewed my poems that contain the water element. Thanks for the reviews %uD83D%uDE01
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Re: Happy
Thank you for the wonderful review Yea, I'm still working on my punctuation and I agree it can be vague at times. Regarding my stanzas, the random number of lines ...
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Re: Chickens and Dragons
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Sep 5, 2020
Hehe this is such a great poem. I have recently seen a cartoon that featured chickens as the creatures that resembled dinosaurs most, so when you compared them to dragons ... -
Re: Drowning in paper
Thank you for taking the time for writing this awesome review! You gave me some really nice tips, like that one with shortening my lines. Thought a little about it ...
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Re: A Pack of Wolves Serenades a Cloudy Sky
Truly the raven lord
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Re: Tale of Souls - Chapter Three
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Sep 4, 2020
Hello there fellow writer . Really nice story. I always loved the fantasy genre with a war like feeling. I feel that the preparations so far are the perfect amount ... -
Re: First day of autumn
Yea, I dunno why i used sweared instead of swore. Nice review, thank you for taking the time to write it
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