Buranko

Thank you your highness

Heh, YWS is sure nice! Look I even got some new author/thinker to read!

Mind blowing how everything is related to our need to communicate.

Hmmm I don't know who is this gentleman Thomas Hobbes but his words really sum up my poem. In my opinion humans, being sociable creatures have a need to be ...

Hehe, my favourite activity when reading a poem is overthinking. Seeing how the mood of a poem is so easily influenced by a change in the meaning is mindblowing. I ...

Thanks mage! It is always a delight reading your praises hehe

The original poem talks about a dad being imprisoned unfairly, due to communism. I liked the idea, and felt that I should try to transform it into a poem about ...

Ah phew I am glad there are only smol mistakes like not enough commas.

No, it's not your, it is you. The persona is talking to the child, but holds his hands and kinda talks to them

Umm, sorry to mislead you but brave adventurers isn't the real meaning. You know that when drunk most people become suddenly really cocky and have the best stories with unbelievable ...

Yea, when talking about money ARE gone I kinda messed up there. And yea, suspense was an effect I wanted to achieve, so I'm happy you felt it. Thanks for ...

Yeah, now that you say it, the "shockingly" is a bit awkward and it makes the line seem overcrowded. As for the last stanza, I did think of using a ...

Aww thank you. This review had such an innocent vibe to it, maybe because you said that you are not that good with poetry reviewing. Anyway I got a tip ...

You see, I wrote this on my phone so no shift enter for me. The first stanza is 3 lines long.

I commented by accident, didn't turn that is this a review switch and have no idea how to erase a comm